I am tired of thinking it’s bad because it’s a translation. I have a sneaking suspicion that it’s bad in the original language also.
And why can they not break out of this boring pompous mode? Everyone is fully aware that noone is actually going to read this entire drab spiel. So why not ditch the big words and long sentences and just get to the point?
Or at least let someone who knows how to get to the point with a modicum of elegance write it. That someone would be me.